Paragraph writing

Good morning
The attached video is an introduction to developing paragraph writing for our information report unit and we have been talking about PEEing in our paragraphs (Point, Example, Explain).
Please support your child by setting aside time to watch the video below and discuss with them.  We will be working on paragraph writing on Thursday so please assist your child watch this video before then. The video will assist students come to class with prior knowledge about what is required and how the paragraph is set out.

Thanks for your ongoing support

Mr McSevich


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